Henry’s Cooking Experience
- 作者: Chan Yuk Yu
- 寫作年級:
- 寫作日期: 2008-10
- 學校: Hong Kong And Macau Lutheran Church Ming Tao Primary School
When Henry came back from school yesterday afternoon, he felt hungry. So he went to the kitchen. When he opened the fridge, he saw some fish. But all the food was uncooked.
He remembered a TV programme teaching him how to cook. “I can cook some food,” said Henry to himself. So he went to the kitchen. He remembered there were eggs, bacon and instant noodles in the fridge.
Finally he cooked delicious noodles. His mother went home and saw his food. So she tasted it. “Very yummy! You are very good! You are a good boy!” exclaimed his mother. “Thank you!” said Henry.
老師評語
I appreciate that you can link your writing with so many connectives. You are so creative. But don't you think it is dangerous to cook by yourself?