My Favorite animals
- 作者： Chen Wei Wen
- 寫作年級： P4
- 寫作日期： 2009-1-5
- 學校： Five Districts Business Welfare Association School
I like monkeys best. They live in zoos. They look like men. They are small and thin. They are brown. They eat bananas. We can see them in zoos. I like them because they are cute.
老師評語
The description of the monkey is real and relevant. The author can connect his life experience while describing the animal.