Letter to my pen friend

Dear Peter,

How are you? Christmas had just passed. What did you do then? I did something interesting. Let me tell you now.

I had a Christmas dinner with my family on 25th December in a hotel. I loved eating turkey. After dinner, we played games and exchanged presents. I also met Santa Claus, He gave me a Christmas present. It was a hair clip that I liked. It was the first time that I received a Christmas present from Santa Claus and I loved it very much! Later, my parents brought me to Tsim Sha Tsui to watch the beautiful lights. I think this Christmas trip was quite unforgettable and I hope I will be happier next year. How did you spend your holiday?

Please write soon.

Love,
Miki


老師評語

A vivid description of an experience. A commendable presentation.