My Chinese New Year Holiday
- 作者: Chow Ming Yan
- 寫作年級: P5
- 寫作日期: 2010-2
- 學校: Hong Kong And Macau Lutheran Church Ming Tao Primary School
Today, I want to tell you something about my Chinese New Year holiday. On the last day of the year of the Cow, I had a very happy experience. (This is a good sentence, I like it! ) In the afternoon, I went to a Chinese restaurant to have lunch with my family. After that, I went to my friend’s home and played with my friends. We played happily. In the evening, we had a big meal ('A big meal' is a good phrase. Well done!) , we ate many things, such as a whole fish, some vegetables and some beef. After that, we went to the flower market. It was very crowded, I saw many kinds of flowers such as kumquats, peach blossoms and peonies. I bought a pair of new shoes in the flower market, I was very happy on that day.
This is the end of my sharing, thank you!
老師評語
Excellent! You've got some good words (e.g. a big meal, such as...) and good sentences in your sharing. And the use of past tense is correctly. Your content is quite rich also. I really enjoy reading your sharing.