An Unforgettable Experience
- 作者: Peng Xueting
- 寫作年級: P4
- 寫作日期: 2011-12
- 學校: Five Districts Business Welfare Association School
Have you ever had an unforgettable experience like me?
Last Sunday, it was a hot day. I felt very hot. After lunch, I wanted to eat an ice cream. So I went out and bought one. I was so careless that I dropped the ice cream on the ground.
I did not have enough money to buy another one. Oh! My ice cream.
老師評語
What a pity! Very clear expression of feeling.