A letter to my penfriend
- 作者: Vivian Chan
- 寫作年級: P6
- 寫作日期: 2008-6-30
- 學校: Five Districts Business Welfare Association School
26th November, 2007
Dear Alan,
I am happy with my examination result. I got high marks.
My dream job is to be a fashion designer. I like to design clothes. I want to design beautiful and stunning clothes. I want to design my family clothes too. People will surely love my clothes. They will be happy. I want my parents to wear my clothes first. I want my sister to be my model. I will go around the world to meet many superstars and models. I will be famous. I know I can’t be a fashion designer unless I like designing clothes.
Please reply soon.
Love,
May
老師評語
A modest presentation of ideas. It’s a fairly commendable start.