The Sword Fight
- 作者: Mak Hiu Wai
- 寫作年級: P4
- 寫作日期: 2009-10
- 學校: Hong Kong And Macau Lutheran Church Ming Tao Primary School
I have two swords, one is for my young sister and one is for me.
I fight my young sister with my sword. After, I take my sword and run to my young sister. Then I say “Let’s fight,” I ran to her. The exciting and horrible war starts!
Suddenly, my sister falls over as she fights. Then, I point my sword to her. My young sister surrenders. I win the fight and she gives me some presents. I write this story after the war.
A few days later, I take the story to school for a competition.
It wins first prize. I am very happy.