A Letter to a Friend
- 作者: Chan Wai Yin
- 寫作年級: P4
- 寫作日期: 2011-12
- 學校: Five Districts Business Welfare Association School
Dear Helen,
How are you? I would like to tell you what I did in the camp last month.
Last month, we stayed in a tent. First I set up the tent at the campsite. Next I picked up all the rubbish nearby. After that I cooked lunch and played hide-and-seek with my friends. I was very happy. I had a wonderful time.
Hope to go camping with you next time.
Love,
May
老師評語
Your writing is fluency and smooth.