A Terrible dream
- 作者: TSE CHEUK HEI
- 寫作年級: P6
- 寫作日期: 2009-1-5
- 學校: Five Districts Business Welfare Association School
I dreamt that I was in a cave, without even a sight of light. I walked for a while. Then I saw a pair of fierce eyes shining in the darkness. A low voice talked, "Get that boy for dinner." I knew something horrible would happen at that time. So I ran backwards. I saw little light. I knew that it was the cave entrance. I ran fast, but I heard loud voices of foot steps.
Suddenly, I was caught by a big hairy hand. I struggled, but I couldn’t even move when he squeezed me.
Then I woke up, I was on a big wood bowl. A huge monster used a big knife and cut me into pieces. But strangely, I didn’t feel painful. Then I was put into a pot above the fire. The large monster leader used a fork to stab my head. I was very scared. Then I woke up. What a terrible dream!
老師評語
Very imaginative! I cannot stop reading before I get to the end. It ends at the climax. It is interesting. It seems that the author had really experienced the horrible murder.