I love Christmas
- 作者: Lai Tsz Kei
- 寫作年級: P5
- 寫作日期: 2009
- 學校: Five Districts Business Welfare Association School
I like Christmas very much. It is the most wonderful festival. The weather is cold at Christmas. It is in winter.
People do a lot of things to celebrate this festival. We can listen to the carols and the bells ringing everywhere. We can see joyous faces everywhere too. People like going to the shopping malls to watch the giant Christmas trees. The trees shine with colorful flashing lights.
Christmas is a gift-giving season too. I like receiving Christmas cards and presents from my friends and parent.
It is an enjoyable time to play, sing and eat with friends and family members. I love having parties with them. I love Christmas the best!
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