Introducing My Younger Sister
- 作者: Zoe Tsang Suet Yi
- 寫作年級: P5
- 寫作日期: 2010-9
- 學校: Hong Kong And Macau Lutheran Church Ming Tao Primary School
Good morning, everyone. My name is Zoe. I would like to introduce a person to you, that’s my younger sister, Emily.
Emily has small eyes, a small nose, a small mouth, big ears and thin eyebrows. She also wears a pair of blue glasses. She is taller than most of the children of her same age. However, in her class, she is not the tallest because she is younger than many people.
Emily is studying in this school, too. She is now a Primary 3 student. Her favourite subjects are Art, Bible, Chinese, General Studies and Physical Education. It is because she is also good at these subjects.
Emily’s hobbies are drawing pictures and reading books. She likes reading about history, comics and biographies about famous people. She likes running, playing badminton and rope skipping in the park twice a week. Her favourite colour is blue, because she thinks the blue colour represents freedom and she likes liberty very much. Her favourite beverage is Coca-Cola. However, Mum says that these drinks have caffeine, so she only let us drink it twice in half a year.
Emily’s favourite snacks are hamburgers, ice-cream and potato chips. She has been eating them since 2006. Her favourite animals are pandas because she thinks they are so cute. However, she also scares that they will be extinct.
When Emily grows up, she wants to be a P.E. teacher because she is interested in this job and she is good at this subject too.
That’s all for my sharing, thank you for listening.
老師評語
The ideas are well-presented and well-organised. You have made use of various vocabulary in your writing.